Friday, August 8, 2008

How to Write a Textbook


So how much do you know about how textbooks are created? I thought you might be interested in having a mini walk-through of the process.

The subject area in which I've done the most work is social studies, so I'll describe that. (I've also edited literature anthologies.)

The first thing you need to understand is that, in terms of educational publishing, there are two kinds of states: adoption states and open-territory states.

An adoption state is one in which every public school district in the state will buy all the books in a subject area in a single year. They will buy all their social studies books in the same year. All math books will be bought in a single year, but a different year from social studies. Same for English. Same for science. Same for world languages.

In a social studies adoption year, no school district in the state can look at any prospective social studies programs until the state adoption committee reviews all the products and "adopts" them as being approved for that state. The approval depends on whether the programs meet the state's content standards for that particular subject. Many Southern and Western states are adoption states. The largest are California, Florida, and Texas.

Open-territory states don't have the adoption process. Individual school districts decide when to buy books, and the books don't go through a state-approval process. In other words, school districts are open to textbook salespeople.

At this point, you must be wondering what this has to do with writing textbooks. Well, the little-known truth is that adoption states have far more clout over what goes into textbooks than open-territory states do. Look at it this way. If in a given year, every single high school in Texas is going to purchase new U.S. history books while only 10 percent of Illinois high schools are planning to buy books, which state do you think will have the most purchasing power? And which state's standards do you think publishers will be more diligent about meeting?

Have you ever wondered why the Alamo gets so much coverage in U.S. history books when it was a relatively inconsequential battle except in terms of symbolism for a single state? Well, now you know. It gets a lot of play because Texans care about it, and Texas has a huge influence over what goes into American textbooks.

What publishers do when they are developing any program is to examine the standards of the states where they hope to sell a lot of books in the year after publication. Then they'll write chapter outlines that cover the traditional course content and also include everything the states want. (These are not always the same thing. I have at times seen state standards that call for historically inaccurate information. When that happens, you just do the best you can at meeting the standard while writing the truth.)

The editors then send the completed outlines to academic experts, who look for any thing that's inaccurate, overlooked, or over-emphasized. When the reviews are returned, the editors create final outlines and send them off to freelance writers.

And this is where I'm going to disillusion you. When your children bring textbooks home from school, they usually have author names on the spine. I'll bet you thought those people wrote the books, right?

Usually not. At one time, textbook authors did write books, but now they are most likely just part of the team of reviewers. (I'm talking about elementary and high school books here, not college books.)

Instead, uncredited freelancers like me write the chapters according to the specifications we receive from the publisher.  Not only am I working from an outline, but I have a sample chapter and a set of writing guidelines I have to follow. I also know roughly how many words I have for each section of the chapter. Some publishers even send a rough layout that shows where every map, photograph, and chart will appear.

Currently, I'm working on a chapter of European history. It isn't for a history book; it is a history chapter that will be included as part of an entirely different subject. Because of that, the history I'm writing is very condensed. I have to cover the Renaissance, Reformation, Age of Exploration, Scientific Revolution, Enlightenment, French Revolution, Industrial Revolution, Age of Empire, two World Wars, the Cold War, and contemporary European history in 34 pages. These are pages that will also include visuals, so in reality I have roughly 7,600 words.

In that limited amount of space, I have to be thorough, complete, clear--and explain as much complexity as I can. (Yeah, right.) I also have to make sure the text reads at a middle-school reading level. To prove the accuracy of what I write, I have to submit photocopied pages of sources for every fact and statistic I use. When I finish writing the chapter, I also have to write assessment questions (and answers).

Once the editor receives my manuscript, she will probably send it to a number of in-house and out-of-house reviewers. These might include her managers, academic specialists in European history, and classroom teachers. Once she receives everyone's comments, she'll edit the material.  At this stage, she will also need to cut any overruns. In textbook publishing, you can't just add another page or two the way you might with a novel. Everything has to fit in a certain number of pages, decided upon very early in the project.

After this revision, the editor will probably send the second draft to fact checkers, who will verify every fact and statistic by trying to find different sources from the ones I used. Once the editor makes her corrections based on fact checking, the third draft will probably go to a copy editor, who will review the grammar and spelling and punctuation. (I keep saying probably because the publisher may do any of these steps in a different order from the one I've indicated.) When the pages are in the final form, several people will read them one last time for any typos that might have been overlooked. (Do you know what a classroom disaster it can be if a reference to a public health program comes out as "pubic health"? It's happened.)

Now you have some idea of how U.S. middle school and high school textbooks are created. What I haven't covered is all the work that goes into the design of the pages, the researching of photographs and other images, and the actual physical production of the books. Those processes are every bit as complicated as the ones I've outlined here.


Textbook writers need a reference library . . . 


and a knowledge of geography.


15 comments:

Bob Brague (rhymeswithplague) said...

Just reading about the textbook publishing process makes me exhausted!

The photo of your reference library brought back memories of my days at IBM as a technical writer because The Chicago Manual of Stylereigned supreme there. (Of course, if you look through a typical IBM technical manual, you won't believe for a minute that the company ever has had such a thing as a technical writer on its payroll.) I was personally a fan of E. B. White's Elements of Style and Theodore Bernstein's The Careful Writer also.

Your informative, enjoyable post reminded me of what a fellow worker once told me, "I like specs; that way, you don't have to think." Especially disheartening is your sentence, "Everything has to fit in a certain number of pages, decided upon very early in the project." This brought back memories of a manager asking when a project would be finished before we had any idea of what we were to describe.

Perhaps you can tell that I'm quite happy that I'm no longer an IBM technical writer.

As usual, a great post!

Jay said...

It does explain why some school text books are dry as dust and have no 'soul'. It's because however good each individual writer is, if the 'management' input is too high, it's not easy to put any personality into it, and it's hard to make a cohesive, flowing whole out of a sum of parts. The book must get nit-picked to death.

It sounds like a thankless task, too.

Cheryl said...

I love learning about new things. Being that you're a social studies expert, do the books you work on really change much from year to year? And, how often do school systems buy new books? How much of your year is spent on textbooks?

My daughter's freshman textbooks spent most of their time on the laundry room shelf. I'm not sure why.

Ruth Hull Chatlien said...

Yes, that's one reason they're bland. The other is the space constraints. It is difficult to put in the "telling detail" that makes a story come alive when you have 224 lines to cover the entire Italian Renaissance.

Ruth Hull Chatlien said...

Cheryl, most school buy new books every 6 to 10 years. History books are updated every couple of years, mostly with new stuff at the end. A major revision might be done every 5 to 7 years, and those do change a lot.

My whole year is pretty much spent writing educational material, but some of that is textbooks, some is formal assessment, some is worksheets that go with textbooks, some is technology. It just depends on what jobs are out there at the moment.

Sis said...

Ruth, would you be listed in any credits anywhere in the book?

And do you bid on the job? My husband is a purchasing manager for our parish and deals with bids for everything from toilet paper to dump trucks.

daffy said...

Wow.. how interesting. I had no idea. This is why blogging is so good. You learn little nuggets like this from friends.

Dawn said...

That was so interesting to read about your job. You must be a genius to do what you do! I can also see why you keep a blog...it's a whole different type of writing. My favorite teacher in high school wrote a Washington state history book, it was a fabulous book, and I'm trying to find it for my daughter but haven't had any success yet.

Ruth Hull Chatlien said...

No, Sis, I'm not listed in the books at all. I'm just the hired gun. LOL

And no, we don't bid. The publishers set the rates, and we choose whether or not to accept. Educational writing is a fairly specialized field and difficult to get into. Publishers don't like to use writers they don't know because the work is so demanding and the deadlines are so tight. (I usually have only three weeks to research and write a 30-page chapter.) So they usually have a list of writers they like to hire. It can be difficult to get on someone's list, but once they use me, they usually consider me an "A list" writer.

Oh, and I made a mistake above. I don't have 224 lines to write about the Italian Renaissance--I have 450 words.

Dawn, have you tried used book outlets like Alibris to find your state history?

Pat - An Arkansas Stamper said...

Fascinating! I very much enjoyed this expose(imagine the accent), Ruth! Hats off to you! I'll not ever again look at a text book in the same way.

Now, we know "the rest of the story."

afeatheradrift said...

I'm totally depressed now. I surely thought textbooks were written by individuals who perhaps had a masters in the subject area? LOL. And now I know why the Alamo gets such a big treatment. When you read about it in reality, it wasn't at all, and well Texas history is a bit on the conqueror side wasn't it? It sounds like a hard job for those who actually do write it, Ruth. You must be extremely talented to fit into all those perameters.

zorra said...

Very interesting, and hard work!

Rosezilla said...

Thanks so much for sharing this! I think it sounds like interesting, although possibly frustrating, work! I bet you often wish you had room for just a few more words to spice it up a little, eh? I have to admit we were extremely picky about what textbooks we used with our boys, and usually decided on "whole" books of history, philosophy, biographies and such.

Wormwood's Doxy said...

I had a similar shock when I started writing for the Feds and was asked to write speeches for the muckety-mucks. "You mean they don't write their own?!??!", I asked naively...

That said, it's fun to turn on the television and hear your words coming out of the mouth of some famous (or infamous!) politician. ;-)

Cheers,
Doxy

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