Saturday, August 23, 2008

Never-Ending Story Meme: Play It Forward

Since so many of us enjoy creative writing, I've had an idea for a different type of meme for several weeks. But I couldn't come up with the inspiration to get it started. Then LJ at Presbyterian Gal posted a very vivid dream that featured God as a character, and it reminded me of an old one-page start to a novel that was sitting in my files. I decided to use that.

So here goes. The goal is to write a story that branches off into different possibilities and to see how long bloggers can keep it going. I'm going to post the start of a story. Anyone who wants to participate may write a version of the next chapter, provided you leave it unfinished and ask your own readers to carry it on.

If you decide to play, please follow this procedure.

  1. Put a link back to this post. Label the Link "Chapter One."
  2. Write your own installment and label it "Chapter Two." Remember to leave it unresolved. 
  3. Come leave a comment on this post when you're done. I will list links to all possible versions of the second chapter at the bottom of this post.
  4. Invite your readers to create possible versions of Chapter Three, following the same procedure. They should link back to you and link back to me.
  5. Anyone who writes a version of Chapter Three should leave it open-ended and invite people to create Chapter Four. Etc, etc.
Let's see what happens and how far this goes. 

P.S. There is no time limit on doing this, but this post will drop into the archives in about a week. Just so you know. And if you have any suggestions for improving the mechanics of how this works, feel free to put them in the comments. I never created a meme from scratch before.


CHAPTER ONE

One night a few years back, I dreamed I was playing gin rummy with God and my father. God was the dealer, of course. He didn't look at all the way I expected him to. His shirtsleeves were rolled up, his tie was askew, and a pencil was stuck behind his ear. Even so, I knew he was God. As soon as the Lord finished dealing, my father put down a run containing the two of hearts, three of clubs, and four of diamonds. I stared at it for a moment before saying, "That's not right. Those cards aren't from the same suit."

Neither one of them answered. My father winked at me and then laid down the rest of his hand. None of the cards went together, but clearly, he thought he had won.

I hadn't even had a turn and was still holding the hand I'd been dealt. When Daddy started to total his points, I said, "You can't count those; they're wrong. We have to go over the rules and start again."

Before I could gather up the cards, God said, "We'll talk about the rules later. At half time."

Half time? I thought. In a card game? Is he crazy too?

That's when I started screaming, "I can't play like this. I don't know what's going on. We have to make the rules clear." Taking a deep breath, I bellowed in God's face, "Do you hear me?"

He gave me the kind of look a parent gives a child who is throwing a tantrum. "I hear you," he said and held out his hand for my cards.

My rage leaked away like air from a punctured tire. Even though my indignation was justified, I could see that God wasn't going to yield to my demands just because I was shouting at him. So I threw my cards down on the table and walked away.

But now I sort of wish I hadn't. Although it was just a dream, it was the first time I'd seen my father since he died when I was eight. Would it have killed me to humor him?





THE REST OF THE STORY (Please Note: I'm listing subsequent chapters with the "string" they follow):

THE REST OF THE STORY (Please Note: I'm listing subsequent chapters with the "string" they follow):

1. Chapter 2 at The Soul on Every Path

Chapter 3-1 at The Wizard's Apprentice


2. Chapter 2 at A Feather Adrift

Chapter 3-2 at Midlife by Farmlight

Chapter 4-2 at Rhymes with Plague.



3. Chapter 2 at Fiwaese.



4. Chapter 2 at Faith in Community

Chapter 3-4 at Prairie Light

Chapter 4-4 at A Home for My Words

21 comments:

Diane said...

Ruth, I'm gone right now, but when I get back on Monday, I'll start working on this.

one more thing: how do you get the flower bullets?

Missy said...

Very cool idea--I'll have to give it a try. Soon. :)

Diane Vogel Ferri said...

this is a great idea, Ruth. I wish I had time to participate - but not when school's starting!

afeatheradrift said...

I'll give it a go tomorrow Ruth. Sounds like fun, but I'm not much for fiction writing. NO IDEAS! But heck, maybe I'll get some professional criticism and learn a thing or two. When I get back from Church, I'll begin!

fiwa said...

How fun! What a great idea!
I would like to play. I'll need to think about it for a little bit though. I'll come back and tell you when I'm ready - assuming I can come up with something.

This is so neat - I can't wait to see how far it goes.

Christy said...

OK Ruth, I did it.

I'm freaked out. I never write--except about me.

And this isn't QUITE about me....

LOL

FranIAm said...

This is great. I wish I did not have so much company and that I had more time to play.

A few months ago a blogger I knew did something similar and it turned out great. I did that a few times, hope I can find time for this one too!

Brilliant idea though!!

Ginni Dee said...

I have been a zombie-writer lately. It's all I can do to keep up with my blog...LOL

I'll follow others chapters tho...great idea!!

XOXOXOX

nikkipolani said...

I'm completely rubbish at creative writing so I will pass. But I'm looking forward to following along.

afeatheradrift said...

Okay, I did it Ruth. You can follow this to read my silly attempt!http://afeatheradrift.wordpress.com/2008/08/24/team-writing-adventure/ I'm going to check other participants now, and see how it's supposed to be done!

Wizard's Apprentice said...

Here's a Chapter 3.. probably too dark, but...
http://wizardsapprentice.blogspot.com/

fiwa said...

Hi Ruth - just stopping by to say I played and chapter two is up.

Thanks!
fiwa

"JEANNELLE" said...

Here's a Chapter 3 following up on "A Feather Adrift's" (Sherry's) Chapter 2:

http://midlifebyfarmlight.blogspot.com/2008/08/ruths-meme-chapter-3.html

Kelly Jene said...

I read about this on Fiwa's blog and just had to come tell you what a great idea this is. This could go on forEVER!

Great story!

Ruth Hull Chatlien said...

Fiwa and Jeannelle, I'm not ignoring you. I'll post and read your installments as soon as I get back from the vet.

Thanks, Kelly. You're welcome to play if you're interesting.

Ruth Hull Chatlien said...

um, that's "interested"

Diane said...

This was hard for me! But I do now have my Chapter 2 up. (I wish I had more time for things like this.)

rhymeswithplague said...

Ruth, I have written a Chapter 4 to go with Sherry's Chapter 2 and Jeannelle's Chapter 3. Please check it out!

Pat - An Arkansas Stamper said...

Ruth, I have written Chapter 5 to follow Bob's Chapter 4. It's up on my blog. This was fun!

RevDrKate said...

I needed an escape...so I wrote a "Three" to Diane's "Two" and it's posted. I have not written fiction since I was in grade school. What fun.

Silent said...

I know it's been a while since this started, but I wrote a "Four" to RevDrKate's "Three."