to my Valentine . . .
With every other man,
the damage comes at entry:serrated knife blade carving me in hemispheres,
good half, bad half, toss the unacceptable
the way one slices a blue-furred softness
from a peach,
then devours the sweet remainder,
sucking on the pit to savor each luscious drop.
But you, my love,
penetrate without injury,
fit me like a joint within its proper socket,
suffuse me like magma in the crevices of earth.
With you inside, my severed halves are unified,
and only when you exit,
do you wound me.
24 comments:
Wow, amazing poem. Thanks for posting it.
And Happy Valentine's Day!
What a gift.
I'm going to print this and give it to Richard. Amazing on literal and figurative levels: sensual!
Truly truly lovely Ruth. You are so very gifted, and Michael is so very lucky!
WOW Ruth! Great Poem. I am not as gifted, so I left a quoted poem for my dearest!
Wow!
There are no words....
Okay, now tell us how you REALLY feel about your hubby!!! LOL Just kidding. I love your poem...it's so so so romantic!!!
I hope you both have a lovely Valentine's Day!!
XOXOXOX
Wow! You are an amazingly talented writer/poet.
I hate to go all Paris Hilton, but that is HOT.....can I link that to my blog?
Sure. And welcome back.
Happy Valentine's Day - a day late!
That poem is astounding Ruth, truly it is.
Thank you!
Gin took the words exactly right out of my mouth. Brilliant minds.....lol.
You and Michael are so blessed to have found each other, Ruth!
xoxoxoxoxo
Now that is true love! Congratulations for being with your soul mate!!!!
Hugs, Sharon
Oh, that's gorgeous. A belated Happy Valentine's Day to you both.
Yes, definitely WOW, Ruth. Searingly honest and open. Many blessings always to you and Michael.
Let me add my "WOW"!!!!
Absolutely wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
With you inside, my severed halves are unified,
and only when you exit,
do you wound me.
Oh yes....
Doxy
Lovely, Ruth, and happily resonant here.
Amazing. Hope you and Michael had a great Valentine's day!
I think you two make a great couple!
That sounds like something I would write too! GReat!
I read this when you posted, but I felt like an intruder...
It's a lovely poem, Ruth - very emotional and sensual. But I still feel like an intruder, ROFL!
XOXO
wow wow wow wow wow. thank you for sharing.
Holy Cow. That was wonderful! You two give testimony to the joy of a happy marriage. Thanks for sharing your loving message here for us to appreciate.
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