Friday, February 13, 2009

Coupling


to my Valentine . . . 

With every other man,
the damage comes at entry:
serrated knife blade carving me in hemispheres,
good half, bad half, toss the unacceptable
the way one slices a blue-furred softness
from a peach,
then devours the sweet remainder,
sucking on the pit to savor each luscious drop.

But you, my love,
penetrate without injury,
fit me like a joint within its proper socket,
suffuse me like magma in the crevices of earth.
With you inside, my severed halves are unified,
and only when you exit,
     do you wound me.

24 comments:

Mauigirl said...

Wow, amazing poem. Thanks for posting it.

And Happy Valentine's Day!

Jennifer said...

What a gift.

Kathy said...

I'm going to print this and give it to Richard. Amazing on literal and figurative levels: sensual!

Sherry Peyton said...

Truly truly lovely Ruth. You are so very gifted, and Michael is so very lucky!

Connie said...

WOW Ruth! Great Poem. I am not as gifted, so I left a quoted poem for my dearest!

rhymeswithplague said...

Wow!

There are no words....

Gin said...

Okay, now tell us how you REALLY feel about your hubby!!! LOL Just kidding. I love your poem...it's so so so romantic!!!

I hope you both have a lovely Valentine's Day!!

XOXOXOX

Jan said...

Wow! You are an amazingly talented writer/poet.

Christy said...

I hate to go all Paris Hilton, but that is HOT.....can I link that to my blog?

Ruth Hull Chatlien said...

Sure. And welcome back.

FranIAm said...

Happy Valentine's Day - a day late!

That poem is astounding Ruth, truly it is.

Thank you!

Joan said...

Gin took the words exactly right out of my mouth. Brilliant minds.....lol.

You and Michael are so blessed to have found each other, Ruth!

xoxoxoxoxo

Sharon said...

Now that is true love! Congratulations for being with your soul mate!!!!

Hugs, Sharon

zorra said...

Oh, that's gorgeous. A belated Happy Valentine's Day to you both.

Jeannelle said...

Yes, definitely WOW, Ruth. Searingly honest and open. Many blessings always to you and Michael.

Barbara B. said...

Let me add my "WOW"!!!!

Lauralew said...

Absolutely wonderful. Thanks for sharing.

Wormwood's Doxy said...

With you inside, my severed halves are unified,
and only when you exit,
do you wound me.


Oh yes....

Doxy

Songbird said...

Lovely, Ruth, and happily resonant here.

Lena said...

Amazing. Hope you and Michael had a great Valentine's day!

I think you two make a great couple!

Diane Vogel Ferri said...

That sounds like something I would write too! GReat!

Sis said...

I read this when you posted, but I felt like an intruder...

It's a lovely poem, Ruth - very emotional and sensual. But I still feel like an intruder, ROFL!
XOXO

Diane said...

wow wow wow wow wow. thank you for sharing.

Border Explorer said...

Holy Cow. That was wonderful! You two give testimony to the joy of a happy marriage. Thanks for sharing your loving message here for us to appreciate.