Saturday, June 12, 2010

requesting feedback


I finished my Outdoor Sketching class yesterday. This was the piece I did in class. It took about 90 minutes. I'm quite pleased with it, and I plan to submit it to the student art show.


I also want to submit one other piece, either the peony or hosta from my last post. I have different reasons for liking each, so I'm really torn. If you would care to offer your feedback, I'd really appreciate it. No need to analyze the pieces. Just tell me which you prefer on a gut level. (If you do have more analytical comments, I'd welcome them. I just don't want anyone to feel that they have to do that.)

Thanks a million!


17 comments:

Mompriest said...

I like them all but my gut says, peony.

Lena said...

My artist husband and I both say Peony.

KathyA said...

Love this latest one. Am going back to look at the others.

KathyA said...

Ruth, I, too, really like them all. For me, it was between the delphinium and the peony. I think I'd go with the peony. Let us know how the show goes.

Robin said...

Hosta.

forsythia said...

I like the hosta too. It contrasts nicely with this one.

ROBERTA said...

peony

Gin said...

Another vote for hostas. :)

Jan said...

Hosta. I love your art!!

rhymeswithplague said...

peony.

Jennifer said...

love 'em both, but heart says peony.

Connie said...

Nice! I like the Hosta

GinB said...

I love them all but I vote peony

Sis said...

My vote is for the peony - I like that it shows nearly the whole plant, including the ground where it's coming from.

Love the potted plant sketch. Good work, girlie. :)
XOXO

Rosezilla said...

This one is really nice. As for a second one, I love the top drawing with the little red flowers. Is it a peony? It's so fresh I could pick it for a bouquet. Glad to see you're back!

susankay said...

Hosta for contrast. Otherwise the peony. I'd be concerned that the peony and this one would be slugging it out.

Cheryl said...

My vote is for the hosta, but my favorite one is the Magic Fountain delphinium. That's not to say that I don't like them all, because I do!